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she was born with arctic lips
    and overcast skin. her hair fell like fresh snow and she was far too thin. her bones in locked closets, joints creaked and shrieked like a rotten floorboard under gossamer feet.
partially written in my a thought a day lifetime journal.
i'm just glad to finally have something to submit for you guys.
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arsenic-sea Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful poem :)
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thesquareroot Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"her bones in locked closets..." excellent line
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Unseen-reality Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh dear, absolutely astounding.
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:iconocean-whispers:
Featured in my journal here: [link]
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leorabbit247 Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
love the rhythm in this one.
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Blacksand459 Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
As I read this, I could smell the snow in the air, and felt a haunting sense of melancholy for the girl...so beautiful and lonely.

Outstanding! B-)
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mismatched-misfits Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much! :rose:
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:iconblacksand459:
Blacksand459 Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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:iconautumnlit:
I love the last line, very clever and well written ^^
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:icondickroman:
this is the most gorgeous poem,
my favourite one that i've ever read
wow
i
this is absolutely incredible :") <3
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