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she was born with arctic lips
    and overcast skin.
    her hair fell like fresh snow
    and she was far too thin.
    her bones in locked closets,
    joints creaked and shrieked
    like a rotten floorboard
    under gossamer feet.
partially written in my a thought a day lifetime journal.
i'm just glad to finally have something to submit for you guys.
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thomarieforever666 Featured By Owner Sep 30, 2014
de nada :) (Smile)
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arsenic-sea Featured By Owner Aug 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
wonderful poem :)
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thesquareroot Featured By Owner Apr 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
"her bones in locked closets..." excellent line
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Unseen-reality Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
oh dear, absolutely astounding.
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ocean-whispers Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2013   Writer
Featured in my journal here: [link]
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leorabbit247 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Professional Digital Artist
love the rhythm in this one.
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Jan 8, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
As I read this, I could smell the snow in the air, and felt a haunting sense of melancholy for the girl...so beautiful and lonely.

Outstanding! B-)
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mismatched-misfits Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much! :rose:
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Blacksand459 Featured By Owner Jan 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome!
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autumnlit Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2012
I love the last line, very clever and well written ^^
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