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her spine was cracked down the middle,
her skin unraveled at the seams.
bloated lungs and an emaciated heart filled her no longer moving chest.
her eyes were still open
and her hands stretching for the last thing she ever saw,
though she'd never reached it.



no one knew the exact cause of death,
except the shadow of a boy who avoided her funeral
like it was a plague.
like she was the plague.
"i can feel it through the fields of graves, a beating heart..."
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-08-30
autopsy by ~mismatched-misfits ( Suggested by BloodshotInk and Featured by Beccalicious )
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RavenDehartFox Featured By Owner Sep 1, 2013   Writer
Death is inevitable, but so is murder. This is greatly written with such a sense, and congrats on the Daily Deviation. Hug 
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catlover234 Featured By Owner Aug 31, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
cool! it's really well written
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thebrilliant Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is really moving
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Elizabeth-R-12345 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is simply beautiful. 
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RaymondGD Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Professional Interface Designer
Congrats on the Daily Deviations! Heart
keep up the spectacular work :D (Big Grin) 
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MrsMiracle Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconbravoplz: Wow, this is very good, congradulations on the daily deviation.
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musicalraz Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
OH THAT`S GOOD....but now i`m sad
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Tyrison Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Student Writer
Very moving (and stilling, in a way, at the same time); I love the last line and the first few; the description drew me right in.  Beautiful! ^^
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animelover74 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013
I like this! It's very good!
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eddsworldobsession56 Featured By Owner Aug 30, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
im amazed.....yep ^.^ good job!!!
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